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Middle: Territory of the Antagonists

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Begins December 1, 2009)

The Middle of a novel, memoir, screenplay encompasses a whooping 1/2 of the scene and page count of the entire story. More writers lose their nerve in the middle of the Middle than in any other spot of the writing process.

Two ways out:
1) Develop a list of all the antagonists that will interfere with the protagonist reaching both her long and short-term goals. (For a list of antagonists, go to: Dramatic Action Plotline.) Once you have the list in place, you’ll likely find the need to introduce some of the elements earlier. CAUTION: do not go back and do it now. Make notes to yourself and attend to them in the next rewrite.

2) Develop the exotic, unusual world of the Middle. Once the protagonist moves from the Beginning into the Middle she usually enters a new world — at least new to her. Let us see, smell, taste, feel, hear that world with the use of authentic details.

Links for more on both the exotic world and the use of antagonists:

First Draft versus Rewrites

Writers Travel Two Journeys

Meaning of Crisis and Climax

Written by:
Martha Alderson
Published on:
November 19, 2009
Thoughts:
3 Comments

Categories: how to start writing a novel, how to write memoirs, screenplay, territory of the antagonists, the exotic and unusual world of the Middle of a story

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  1. Beth Proudfoot

    November 20, 2009 at 2:25 am

    Ah, yes! In that very interesting world, lurking behind the very interesting bushes, is a very disturbed antagonist!

    Reply
  2. Kathryn Fitzmaurice

    November 20, 2009 at 2:58 pm

    I just found your blog and I wanted to say how much I love the name of it! And thank you also for the information on this post.

    Reply
  3. Anonymous

    November 26, 2009 at 5:48 pm

    I haven't checked in on your blog in a long time and now found you discussing exactly what I'm dealing with at the moment.
    Thanks for some good ideas.

    Reply

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