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Pets in Plots: Help or Hindrance?

KATHRYNN DENNIS is the author of Dark Rider and Shadow Rider. The Romance Times Reviews recently awarded Shadow Rider 4 Stars! and writes: “The color, vibrancy, and excitement of the Middle Ages allows Dennis to create a memorable tale of two people whose destiny is tied to a mystical colt. Dennis tells her story with passion, drama, and a love of animals that will enthrall readers.”

Horses take center stage in her stories. I asked her if pets are a hinderance or a help to plotting? (naturally!)

Pets and animals have a lot to contribute to plot—I’m not talking about Old Yeller, or Black Beauty, where the animal is the plot, but rather books where the animal plays a role, though not so prominantly. Animals can be developed as stand alone characters that take action and thus move the plot in a particular direction, or they can add a layer of character to their owner’s personality. How, exactly, do they do that, you ask? The literature is rich with information on the human-animal bond and why people choose the pets they do. It’s called pet-owner profiling. Pets and animals in the story help the reader get into the head of the human characters. There are good studies which suggest pets are an extension of their owners—in looks and in behavior. People tend to chose pets that look like them, much like they choose a human life-partner. Take a look at Paris Hilton, Jessica Simpson, and Jake Gyllenhaal with their dogs. It’s hard to miss the physical similarities. Pet owners also tend to choose pets with personality traits like their own. Turns out you can learn a lot about a person’s character just by knowing what kind of pet they own. Here’s what the seminal research by Kidd and Kidd (1980) tells us about pet-owner personality traits:

• Cat lovers are high in autonomy and low in dominance and nurturing.

• Dog-loving men are high in dominance and aggression. Dog-loving women are high in dominance, too, but low in aggression.

• Horse lovers in general are assertive, introspective, and self-concerned, but limited in cooperativeness, nurturing, and warm human relationships. Male horse-lovers are aggressive, dominant, and less expressive in general. Female horse-lovers avoided aggression and are easy going.

• Turtle lovers are hard-working, reliable, goal-oriented, and see the world as lawful.

• Snake lovers are unconventional, informal, novelty seeking, and unpredictable.

• Bird lovers are contented, courteous, expressive, social, and altruistic.

Pet owners in general are considered to be more nurturing and low in autonomy, no matter what kind of pet they own. I’ve noticed dog and cat-loving characters enrich a fair number of romance novels (for an early example, think of Georgette Heyer’s Ulysses in Arabella) and the personality of a male horse-owner certainly has the makings of a historical romance hero—think cowboys, knights, and men who were rich enough to fox hunt. Dominant men. Aggressive, alpha males who had trouble expressing themselves (until they met the heroine, of course).
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I keep thinking about Rex, the hamster in Janet Evanovich’s Stephanie Plum series. Rex embodies the character of a bounty-hunting woman who keeps a hamster for a pet. She’s high in autonomy and not especially nurturing. Neither is Rex. Both make me laugh.
I’ve not seen many romances where a character owns a nontraditional pet (fish, lizards, or pocket pets like Rex), but I’m sure they are out there.

There are also some interesting reads on the pathological condition known as pet hoarding. Profiles of hoarders suggest the condition is a type of obsessive-compulsive disorder and affected people usually come from chaotic, unstable homes. Just google pet hoarding and you’ll turn up a fair number of psych reviews on the topic.

If you’d like to dig deeper into pet-owner profiling, check out Why We Love the Dogs We Do: How to Find the Dog That Matches Your Personality by Stanley Coren (Simon and Schuster; ISBN 978-0684855028). There are some interesting chapters in there about dogs (breeds) for introverts and extroverts, dominant people, not-so-dominant people, trusting, or controlling people, and an in-depth examination of the dogs owned by various leaders and famous personalities–what their dog-ownership reveals about their non-public personality.

If you understand your character, the character will drive the plot. Not the other way around (a pitfall for writers). So pets can enrich the plot, especially if they are used as character enhancers. They are only a hindrance if they serve no purpose. I love an author who can weave a pet into a plotline or incorporate a pet or an animal to enlighten my understanding of the owner’s character. As a reader, can you recall pets that helped move a story along, or helped you better understand the character of their owner?

I’ll give a free copy of SHADOW RIDER to a randomly chosen commenter!

Thank you, Martha, for inviting me to blog!

For more about Kathrynn Dennis, please visit for a plot interview where we asked Kathrynn about her writing process, with an emphasis on plot.

(NOTE: I had the great honor of working with Kathryn on her book’s early development.)

Written by:
Martha Alderson
Published on:
October 22, 2008
Thoughts:
16 Comments

Categories: Janet Evanovich, Jessica Simpson, Paris Hilton, pets in plot, Romance Times Review, romance writers, Stanley Coren, Stephanie Plum series, Why We Love the Dogs We Do, writing about animals

Reader Interactions

Comments

  1. Anonymous

    October 22, 2008 at 3:59 pm

    Read My Dog Skip by Willie Morris years ago. Still stays with me.

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  2. Kathrynn Dennis

    October 22, 2008 at 4:06 pm

    Thanks for the tip, Anonymous! I am collecting books that fit this topic…My Dog Skip sounds like it’s perfect!

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  3. Plot Whisperer

    October 22, 2008 at 4:25 pm

    Bula, William’s guard dog, in Christine Dodd’s Candle in the Window is instrumental in several of the plot turns in the romance. Love that big, goofy dog…

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  4. Anonymous

    October 22, 2008 at 4:34 pm

    Love this post! I’m going to pay much closer attention to pets-in-stories from now on.

    I’d be interested in hearing how animals can be instrumental in plot.

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  5. Plot Whisperer

    October 22, 2008 at 4:39 pm

    Charlie in The Daily Coyote, a memoir by Shreve Stockon due out 12/2 will be the defining animal in stories for years to come both in terms of driving the plot and revealing more deeply the main character — Shreve.

    Touted as the next Eat, Pray, Love, only so much better…

    If you haven’t visited her blog, do! You’ll be glad you did!

    http://www.dailycoyote.net/

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  6. Anonymous

    October 22, 2008 at 4:47 pm

    Congratulations, Kathryn–

    I’m curious why cat-owners aren’t broken down into male/female traits.

    I agree about the uses of animals in stories–great for plot. I do get a bit irritated when the animal seems to have no story reason for being.

    Your book sounds wonderful, btw!

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  7. KathyW

    October 22, 2008 at 5:53 pm

    Thought provoking topic. Had to really think about it for a while before I could come up with any animals that were not the “stars” of the story.

    The first that came to mind were from movies. The fluffy, fancy cat in “While You Were Sleeping” fit perfectly with the owner we met later in the story. And Brinkley in “You Got Mail” said a lot about Tom Hanks character.

    I tend to read mostly mystery and suspense and don’t notice too many animals there, as secondary characters. Robert Parker’s “Spencer” and “Jesse Stone” books have dogs that reveal their softer side.

    The funny thing is that anything I write has animals, usually horses, in it. But, as I said before I don’t notice many in the books I read. Perhaps, they tend to be a distraction in mysteries?

    Good luck with “Shadow Rider.”

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  8. Kathrynn Dennis

    October 22, 2008 at 6:22 pm

    Jade, the animals (horses) in both of my books, Dark Rider and Shadow Rider–were instrumental to the plot. In the 13th century they were so vital for those in power. Horses=army. Without them, kingdoms were lost. 😉 The horses, and who controls them and how, makes them instrumental to the story.

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  9. Kathrynn Dennis

    October 22, 2008 at 6:24 pm

    Hi Becky, I didn’t see much on female vs male cat owners, there may not be distinguishing charateristics…interestingly, one would think from Cop TV shows that cat hoarders are always female—the data suggests otherwise…male and female’s hoard, but both tend to be at least 40 years or older. Again, they don’t seem to differ in details regarding their personalities.

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  10. Kathrynn Dennis

    October 22, 2008 at 6:25 pm

    Great examples, KathyW! Thanks for sharing!

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  11. Kathrynn Dennis

    October 22, 2008 at 6:26 pm

    Hi Martha, I haven’t read Candle in the Window…but I HAVE to now!
    Thanks for the rec! 😉

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  12. Anonymous

    October 23, 2008 at 12:13 am

    I don’t have a pet in my plot, but the dogs in my life have certainly made me a better person.

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  13. Anonymous

    October 23, 2008 at 2:39 am

    Yes, writetolive, I am a veterinarian by day, and I totally agree, animals, make me a better person, too! Thanks for commenting!

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  14. Plot Whisperer

    October 23, 2008 at 3:37 am

    I keep forgetting you’re a vet, Kathrynn. No wonder you and your use of horses in your stories are so sensitive. Plus, I know you have a horse of your own, too.

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  15. Gary Dobbs/Jack Martin

    October 24, 2008 at 10:20 pm

    I also base any dogs on my own best friend – a boxer called Lennon

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  16. Dorlana

    October 25, 2008 at 3:46 pm

    Hi Martha,
    Just stopped in to read your fabulous blog. Have a Happy Halloween. 🙂
    Dorlana

    Reply

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